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THIHGS THAT MAKE ME HAPPY
I would like to write something about happiness and about things that make me happy.
the (bez člena, hovoríme o ľuďoch vo všeobecnosti)
people happy in general? Many people long for money. They think that the money will make thie
life easier and they will be able to buy everything they want. But it is not exactly right.
Also, some of
the (bez člena, hovoríme vo všeobecnosti)
people find solace in their jobs
. The success at their work is the most important for them. The job is their worl
d and pleasure.
Of course, not only material things make people happy.I would like to mention a co
uple of things that people enjoy: fine arts,
a (bez člena)
good music, a good book, beautiful nature and so on.
The most important thing for me is my family.
I like most of all (Most of all, I like)
spending time with my children and my husband. They make me really happy.
My children smile (The smile of my children)
is the best thing in the world.
a nice day because I like sunshine days- everything seems to be nicer. When I have
a (bez člena)
time, I go to the nature. And
I like reading
a good very
little things that make me happy are: spending time with my friends, a cup of coffee with my mum, a good film, a good joke, Sunday morning, any little success in my
studing english (study of English)
is consisted (consists)
of these little things.
To sum up, everyone looks for his/her
own way how to
happy. People are different and
everyone enjoys his (all of them enjoy their)